Warming

Ahaha, I love the message that is being portrayed in this artwork. It's true and shown in a very hilarious way. What I like most in this work is the expression of the earth. Having a teeth missing and the saliva drooling out is a nice touch and adds detail.

While it's still hilarious, there are some things that I noticed that could use a little more work. The eyes on the earth don't look right. I feel like my own eyes want to focus on the eyes of the earth instead of the whole picture.

What I mean is the black outline stands out to much. Changing that to the outline color used in the earth will help it blend in and make it look like it's connected more to earth. Also, changing the thickness of the line may help as well. Another thing with the eyes is adding some shading to the white part to prevent it from looking flat.

This may be a small suggestion, but the brown circles on our right have an outline around them. This small detail makes them look different than the brown smoke on the left. Taking away that outline will help balance the brown and make it look the same as the other.

This is still a very nice piece with some truth to it <img src="e.deviantart.com/emoticons/w/w…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Wink)" />