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#Global Warming Issue#



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updated15/5/09

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:iconwish04:
Ahaha, I love the message that is being portrayed in this artwork. It's true and shown in a very hilarious way. What I like most in this work is the expression of the earth. Having a teeth missing and the saliva drooling out is a nice touch and adds detail.

While it's still hilarious, there are some things that I noticed that could use a little more work. The eyes on the earth don't look right. I feel like my own eyes want to focus on the eyes of the earth instead of the whole picture.

What I mean is the black outline stands out to much. Changing that to the outline color used in the earth will help it blend in and make it look like it's connected more to earth. Also, changing the thickness of the line may help as well. Another thing with the eyes is adding some shading to the white part to prevent it from looking flat.

This may be a small suggestion, but the brown circles on our right have an outline around them. This small detail makes them look different than the brown smoke on the left. Taking away that outline will help balance the brown and make it look the same as the other.

This is still a very nice piece with some truth to it ;)
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:iconpzuh:
Thanks!!! :D

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"The difference between intelligence and stupidity is, that intelligence has its limits!"

Sowy for ma Bad English.....
:iconsooperninja99:
wow :O

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:iconicey-net:
its not dying yet and it wont in a LONG LONG LONG time but its on its way. What we have right now is just the warmup for the disaster :aww: we haven't seen the least yet :iconsadtruthplz: I wish I wont live long enough to see us completely fuck it up :roll:

You know what the next generation wars are going to be about? Fresh air, fresh water and food :) the most basic things that we need :p
:iconpzuh:
yeah i hope so. But we can see the fact rigt now.

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"The difference between intelligence and stupidity is, that intelligence has its limits!"

Sowy for ma Bad English.....
:iconicey-net:
:o and thats a good thing? man I would of been happier if I never thought of it :hmm: then again thats just part of me :shrug: I think about things like that :lol:
:icongalrcka:
the best idea you have !!
is it illustrator for all??
:iconpzuh:
Yes, work with Corel Draw X3. trims bro!!! :D

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"The difference between intelligence and stupidity is, that intelligence has its limits!"

Sowy for ma Bad English.....
:icondomnx:
Hilarious image. Great stuff!

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"You ask, is America ready for a black President? I say, why not? We just had a retarded one!"
-Chris Rock
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Don't believe the hype.

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April 18, 2008
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