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This game really has potential. Its graphically pleasing, and I like the effects you gave the player when moving, gives it a 3D look.
As this is critique, I obviously have to point out the parts that could be improved so I will.


Music:
This is the type of game that you expect some awesome music to be playing in the background as you blow some stuff up, but there wasn't any. If dA wouldnt allow it then I understand.
But just incase, Newgrounds offer music that you can use for free in your games, you only need to credit the creator in there somewhere =)

Newgrounds Audio Portal

SFX:
Keeping on the subject of sound, I really think some alternating sound effect would help.

With so much blowing up on the screen at the same time, the constant explosion sounds can get annoying.
If you were to add a few different explosion sounds and have them chosen randomly once an enemy is destroyed then it would add a bit of variation and would be less noticable.

Enemys:
The enemys were fun to blow up, however I thought the larger ones could be improved a little.
For example, they dont seem to move at all when I played through, they just float there in the same place and fire at me as soon as I'm in front of them.
It means theres nothing I can really do about them, no tactic the player can use, just have to take the damage as well as give it.
I think if they had more side-to-side movement it would have been more of a fight rather than standing in the line of fire.

Health:
I guess this IS an endurance game, seeing how long a player can last, so this is fine.
However, the health bar went down so slowly that it was hardly noticable, so I found myself not fearing the enemy at all and just driving through them with guns blazing.

If the health was to deplete a little faster, I think it would make the player a little more concious about the enemy.

Overall:
Overall this is a pretty fun game that looks very promising.
The graphics and visuals are very nice to look at and give the game its signature look, the programming of the game seems to be bug free as far as I found and I love how you made the players ship seem 3D in it's movement.
Theres also a nice selection of pick-ups and alternate guns to find throughout the game.

The main problems I found was the music and sound effects, the rest are just parts I felt could be a bit better, but were still fine =)

Nice work! :w00t!:
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buko-studios Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for letting us feature this on our group! Slick visuals, and we love the inverted space and contrast!
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pzUH Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
no problem... and thanks for adding my game to your group... :D
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Satsumo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Graphics are good, it's stylish, program works well, but I didn't enjoy this game. It feels as though your just wading through stuff, there no point trying to dodge anything so theres no tension. You just move left or right and spray bullets. So may enemies come down the screen that they have no significance, you just hold down fire, move a bit and the score goes up. But the score doesn't matter because you didn't do anything to get it.

The sound effects are constant so they have no meaning either, just noise. It goes bang when you shoot something, but its almost impossible to say what the something was, so its just a bang
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pzUH Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I couldn't offer more for this game as this is just a experimental/tutorial-based game, just to get my hands dirty with ActionScript stuff...
but thanks anyway... :D
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jay-cozzy Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2010
Astaga... hebat euy...
buatin dung bos GTA versi flashnya :D
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pzUH Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wkwkwkwkkw....
ntar kalo ilmu gw udah nambah.... entah kapan.... :boo:
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jay-cozzy Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2010
Asik...
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:iconinsaneangel-fernando:
the presentation aint bad, but the game in the other hand is total madness you don't know what's going on you just die not knowing who hit you, which sucks.
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty:
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanks.... :)
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elfofcourage Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
8377 pts. This gam PWNs
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
you beat my score.... :winner:
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elfofcourage Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
When I break 9000 pts, Im gonna use an over-used DBZ ref. XD
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SilverButton Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
fun game
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thanks... :D
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ZaneAsylum Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
nice graphics and sound effects
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you.... :worship:
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SmakDaBunny Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
Wow, the art is very very nice, and I love the style. But it looks like you need to tweak some numbers and speeds. Also it feels like you're running around on ice and you dont have enough control. For a space shooter that's fairly important. Right now it's a big tank on ice eating a hail of bullets and enemies that are on speed while taking very very little damage.

However if this is the way it was intended to counterbalance the speed of the game, then good job :D

Again, I love the art style and it's a fun game though :D
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you so much for your comment.... :worship:
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SmakDaBunny Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
I tried :D
Not quite a full critique so it's a comment xD
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
but its really helping me to improve my game... so thanks again... :worship:
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SmakDaBunny Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2010
no problem! :)
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rboyz Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
aah.. keren!

sudah lama gak main game buatan bangsa sendiri :D

atau mungkin lebih tepat rakyat atau warga bangsa atau apalah..
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
heheheheh....
makasih banyak bang.... :worship:
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FeelingVeryLucky Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010
This game is pretty hot! :D
I lasted for about 6 minutes, killed over 900 enemies, and got 12,000 points.
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wow.... really?? :wow:
it should be the best score so far.... :winner:
my best score just 6000+ points and survived for 2 minutes.... :boo:
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TOPH91 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
maap gan double post....
biasa inet lelet...
hiden satu gan
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
dopost wajib dilempar bata.... :iconbataplz:
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TOPH91 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
aseem tak pikir digerakin pake mos....
mati sebelum berperang...

wew ada tutorialnya:hug:
menuju tkp gan
nais ipoh...
kep posting:iconcendolplz:
ane rate bintang lima deh
:star::star::star::star::star:
lapor mimin ......
wajib masup hot trit inih
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wkwkwkwk....
tengkyu gan.... :iconbataplz:

bikin game juga donkz.... ntar gw cendolin dah.... :iconcendolplz:
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monkeyonthebox Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
ampun dah keren abiss....... minta tutorialnya dunk kk :D
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
hehehehe.... tengkyu bos... :bow:
tutorialnya dari sini: [link]
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monkeyonthebox Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010
waduh thanks ...:D
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cherry-cupid Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
Looks very beautiful. We should collab sometime. :D I <3 flash.
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
thank you.... :worship:
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ajiraiya Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010   Digital Artist
Wow! amanjing! :wow:

bener kata agan2 diatas.
wajib cendol kuning nih!
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wkwkwwkw....
biasa wae kang.... masih cupu gini kok... :boo:

ngemeng2x cendol kuning ki bentukke gek koyo opo??? nek dari namanya kok ketoke ra enak tenan.... :puke::poo:
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ajiraiya Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010   Digital Artist
wkaka :rofl:
imajinasimu njijiki.. :shithappens:
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
lah sampeyan sik ngasih ide cenndol kuning sih.... aku kan trus dadi kepikiran.... :D
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TOPH91 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2010
walah.....kalian berdua pasangan maho yg membahas hal yg tabu di muka umum
sungguh terlalu:iconsubzerotipsyplz::iconscorpioncomboplz:nyoh abab
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reyrey78921 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
bikin versi hp nya lah...=D
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
wah ilmu ane belon nyampe....
mungkin lain kali.... :D
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encoretheangel Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
wooooooow, gemnya seruuu abiiisss :thumbsup: wajib cendol :iconcendolplz:
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
mangkasih gan cendolnya.... nih gw bales pake bata... :iconbataplz:
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encoretheangel Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010
eiiiitttssss.... *counter attack!! dibales bata 3x lipat lebih ampuh dari deterjen lain

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Loone-Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
sebuah game impossible versi shooter XD keren tapi
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pzUH Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
hehehehe....
emang itu tujuan utamanya..... :D
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Loone-Wolf Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
lol..
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