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my first work that done in Corel Draw X4

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:iconking-rastel:
Here is the constructive critique you wanted:

It looks like a promotional card for a Transformers trading card game. The form and design seem pretty solid and the boarder looks good however the background is fighting with the grey part of the robot. I suggest a slight changed grey with a touch of color of blue or even green to help add more contrast of color.

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:iconpzuh:
Yeah, i always have no idea with the background. Btw, thanks for the crit :D

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:iconajiraiya:
wanguuun tenan :clap:

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I don't care what you think
As long as it's about > me < :ignore:
:iconpzuh:
Tengkyu bos!!!

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"The difference between intelligence and stupidity is, that intelligence has its limits!"

Sowy for ma Bad English.....
:iconkemmeru:
Wow, cool! This must have been fun to draw. I can see why it's called "the bee." Yellow and balck ftw!
:iconmondfluch:
Your first work? Oha. You've got talent!
:iconkok-gini:
angstappp anjir :worship:

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:clap: hip! hip! horrrrraayyy....!! :D

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:icondark-jackal:
Nice shading the character profile came out well :aww:
:iconpzuh:
Thanks :D

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"The difference between intelligence and stupidity is, that intelligence has its limits!"

Sowy for ma Bad English.....

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May 25, 2008
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